My Goa I am proud to be your son!!!!
I am ready to tear my chest for me to own!!!!
My heart with joy leaps for being here I was born!!!!
My soul burns with anguish for all the havoc done!!!!
If any time my motherland needs my life let me adorn!!!!
My Goa you are my beloved motherland!!!!
This is where my ancestors came from!!!!
Even an inch of it I cannot hand!!!!
Nor spare it to an alien for a sum!!!!
Yours is the air which I had breathed first!!!!
Yours is the air I want to breathe last!!!!
Yours is the water which appeased my thirst!!!!
I am ready to sacrifice my self cause it is come to worst!!!!
My blood is thine for any future date!!!!
My Goa you are in the hands of gangsters!!!!
Your own priests have turned into molesters!!!!
Even a prostitute only sells her cunt!!!!
But the politicians have sold you back and front!!!!
You are my Goa and I am your son!!!!
I am not going to wait to mourn!!!!
I am getting ready with a loaded gun!!!!
I am going to spare none!!!!
I will not rest till it is done!!!!
And at the end I want to tear my chest and shout from the bottom of my heart and say
I HAVE WON!!!!
GOOD BYE FOR NOW
PREMANAND NAIK
You have witness the horrors as you fellow Goans were charred to death. You speak right from your heart without senors (censors) to sense the failure of justice in Goa. You have seen a human fallen to the Lucifer of Goa. After all a tribal is a human.The ones who laid their lives for the sake of your state has won the hearts of Goans, by enlightening the rest of Goa to bold the chest to speak and resist the evils of Goan Molesters or the Vampires (politicians). We need more like you to break the barriers of these vampires and unite the people of Goa irrespective of race.
ReplyDeleteWell written Poem Mr. premanand, people are yet to come into their senses inspite of all these atrocities met by them at the hands of rogue Politicians. My kind appeal to people of Goa please! please! vote and elect regional party to power in next election and gun down these current bunch of jockers who are playing with the life of poor people for self benefit. This is an eye opener to all Goans specially crumb eaters.
ReplyDeleteAwesome, This should be Goans anthem.... amen
ReplyDeleteWhat a stupid thing! It would be downright shameful to call it a poem or an anthem. "I am ready to tear my chest for me to own?" Hahahaha!!! This chap has decided that a poem is only about getting words to rhyme...school kids will turn out better stuff. Please I humbly request...all of you "NizGoenkars" can unite. The intellectuals of Goa will never join any of you in your stupid attempts at destroying the state whilst proclaiming that you all are "saving it". Seriously all of you need some education. You are getting ready with a loaded gun? You are going to spare none? I've got one a cannon in my pants...please come suck it !!!
ReplyDeletePremanand Naik you you have truly expressed the true feeling of Goans,
ReplyDeleteI have read the below two comments somewhere else and I know they are from one FRUSTRATED person who longs for publicity but cannot get it like he used to on Niz Goenkar. "B" will always be "B"
ReplyDeleteComment No. 1:
"What ???? Clearly you were in some state of intoxication when you wrote this "masterpiece" considering that none of the chamchas of this site have understood a word and hence not bothered to reply! Why don't you give it a read again when you are sober? See no offence...write two words in English...no issues at all...but let them make sense!!! Hahaha!P.S: Please refer the Oxford dictionary for the difference between the words "Lose" and "Loose"!!!!"
Comment No. 2:"What a stupid thing! It would be downright shameful to call it a poem or an anthem. "I am ready to tear my chest for me to own?" Hahahaha!!! This chap has decided that a poem is only about getting words to rhyme...school kids will turn out better stuff. Please I humbly request...all of you "NizGoenkars" can unite. The intellectuals of Goa will never join any of you in your stupid attempts at destroying the state whilst proclaiming that you all are "saving it". Seriously all of you need some education. You are getting ready with a loaded gun? You are going to spare none? I've got one a cannon in my pants...please come suck it !!!"Both come from the same arsehole under different ID's. If he cannot digest it, let him go and jump in the Dona Paula Ocean behind his so-called unfurnished Bungalow.
Baba Premanand,
ReplyDeleteHi tuji kovita itli bori astana, ti eka Bebdeak bori sozmun evonk nam. Tumven ti Konkani lipin dirdogxon kel'li tor, ti tea benddeache toklen goddiek vosot asteli.
Once upon a time I had a friend who was very Sabdo
ReplyDeleteBut one day he suddenly decided to become a Bebdo
Being a journalist, he thought he was the master of English
But by picking others’ mistakes, he proved himself to be foolish
Whether born in Jua and settling in Dona Paula
Will never make him look better than a Khuala
Let him comment from UAE, Goa or Singapore
He will always remain an arsehole to the core
To Premnand: Great effort putting into words, as best as you can, your true inner feelings & concerns.
ReplyDeleteWhy use the oxford dictionary? What comes from the heart with good intentions matters.
ReplyDeleteHi DLP:
ReplyDeleteReading the 2 comments No. 1 & No 2, gives me the impression that it comes from a demented "NERD".
I have decided to name this commentator and Clown "HAHAHA! ".
I had a similar comment, recently, questioning me about spelling mistakes and my level of English.
I hope HAHAHA understands , that Niz Goenkar is a forum open people of all educational backgrounds & levels.
It is" not" purely for intellectuals or academics.
Goa is not made up of just Intellectuals.
The comment (no1 & No 20 is that of a person with short sightedness and an extreme form of "frustration".
He believes there is no other person like him & He likes & chooses to be "petty".
Hi Diogo:
ReplyDeleteI think, sincere people reading NG are sufficiently intelligent enough to understand spelling mistakes.
We all make them and I am the first to admit to this.we are not "PURISTS".
As you say , NG is not a forum that conducts a "spelling contest" on comments.
It is more a forum to understand the views & sentiments from a cross sections of the community on various topics.
Hi Diogo:
ReplyDeleteAs soon as the father, of the person, that criticises the spelling and grammatical errors here on NG, supplies us with a "Spellchecker", we will try to conform to good spellings and grammar.
Additionaly , he should look for another hobby, instead of looking for spelling and grammatic mistakes on comments here on Niz Goenkar.Commenting on peoples spelling mistakes can only come a LIFES LOSER.
There is a famous proverb....".a bad carpenter always blames his tools".
The person that loves to criticise & insult the commentators here, for their spelling / grammatic mistakes, and even points of view,is no different.
There is a difference, in "expressing a different opinion" & a, "plain insult".He sadly thinks both are the same
I am proud of the 39 sonovabitches plus "mum - eeeeee"
ReplyDeleteIn Goa only a nerd can lead the " ladye" herd
ReplyDeletePure Konkani, 100% marks dlp Saibak!
ReplyDeleteDLP Saib is a poet too. This reminds me of someone called bebdo writing on this forum who suddenly started asking for money to become a politician. Niz Goenkar is doing a great job in finishing corrupt people and politicians of the lowest ebb. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteTo whomsoever it may concern!
ReplyDeletegentleman?
I am very happy and delighted that so many of my brothers read and like my articles.
I am equally happy that one gentleman has criticized my above article.
he has reminded me that i have to be more careful next time.which i will do.
But let me also say that we all the writers on NG are writers by accident and not by profession.
The only intention and the idea is Goa awakening.
If i was a great poet i would have been Rabindranath Tagore of Goa.
we have our own profession and whenever we get break from our work in place of taking rest we go to the cybercafe and slog there to write on the burning issues concerning our motherland Goa. And we assure you that all these criticism will give us extra energy to write and work for the just cause of our motherland.
Keep criticizing,that is your job. writing poems is my job
take care we still like you.
yours fin the cause of Goa and Goans
Premanand Naik
Writers must learn from Rajan Narayan, the lion who resisted and is still resisting the violent criticism from the corrupt individuals of Goa. Naik you must be proud of what you wrote and we appreciated your feelings accelerating right from your heart for the sake of your state.You go ahead to fight for the rights of your state and criticism is a rich experience on which you will be able to control self and others. As your age progresses so will you experience the richness of your patience. We love criticism and we love your articles don't get a step back after all you will be much bolder than what you are today as a writer. Expressing is better rather than hatching hatred or gossiping at the back. Hope you will agree what we have written in this blog. Cheers up P. Naik.
ReplyDeleteWell said Premanand!
ReplyDeleteThis guy always keep criticizing others because he thinks or feels that he is a perfecionist. Well, we are all perfect in our own little ways. You can write a poem, I can write a poem and there are many other readers on NG who can write poems. We should not get discouraged by the comments of monkeys like this one. I have already recognized who he is on his comments and words. If he has got guts let him comment again. He may think he is smart, but he should also know how to change his language and style of wrting so that he can go undetected. I have said this before and I will say it again. A Baboon always praises his own arse because it is red.
Hi N.Fernandes,
ReplyDeleteThere's no response from HAHAHA!!! He says, he's got a Cannon in his Pants and wants someone to suck it. I am sure even a Pig will get sick, and turn the other way round, to look at his so-called Cannon. I wonder if he knows how to wear pants and if he can hide his Tom Thumb (Cannon? self imagination or consolation) in there.